1. A lot of places seem silly. Some things and reasons are almost clear at a glance. Gibb disappears, and Tib is anxious. When he sees the secret room for animal experiments, he doesn't leave. He is anxious to enter, otherwise it implies that Gibb is inside. The heroine couldn't understand it stupidly. The male protagonist jumps up when the female protagonist comes in. Please stand in the dark and she is in the light. You can see who she looks like. You even pounce on it. I really doubt if this is deliberately taking advantage.
2. I don't mean to whitewash the villain, but magic is to provoke you. It's okay for people to want to develop, and magic is not bad. The former students are also voluntary, and animal experiments are not absent on the earth. If you can't bear the pig's feet, you should be filled with righteous indignation at the beginning of the animal experiment, and then you will hurt your own interests and save the animals by the way? And why you are particularly opposed to hurting animals, can you give an explanation, because you are kind-hearted and naturally like this?
3. The emotional progress of the male and female protagonists is a bit rushed. To be honest, this article is a bit like "Howl's Moving Castle" using magic, weird old lady, deformed equipment, blond male protagonist, similar facial features, gorgeous multicolored glass, flowing water Magical mimicry, water-like bird, spark-like magic. But the life experience of each character in Howl, the character and emotion of the characters are distinct. It is reasonable and reasonable for the male and female protagonists to meet, argue, understand, support, and finally reckless from pity to love. Can you explain to me what happened to Mary?
The little brother next door said I was a red-haired monkey, so I was shy and liked him a little bit, so if he had an accident, I would desperately try to save him? This can only be said to be young and ignorant, and the newborn calf is not afraid of tigers. The characters' characters are not clear enough, and the characters don't stand up, which is what disappoints me the most.
The male protagonist is a young arrogant and can understand, but can you give a few more shots and describe the sincerity and kindness of the young man. The problem with this film is that the characters are too shallow. If you have time to talk about how the heroine found the Witch's Flower, you might as well spend some effort and spend to find something for the two heroines. Cultivate feelings.
And the heroine, how are you sure that Jib and Tib are a couple, whether a brother or sister can be a mother, a daughter, a father and a son are possible in animals, how old are you with these pink bubbles in your head!
4. A pair of villains who pursue magic and love their students. The experiment fails. If the teacher loves students, they can't stand the blow, or they will become more and more crazy and lose the ability to control their emotions. Or decadent depression. Only these two directions are interesting. Your character is tepid and has no change, and the character's emotions are not strong. It can only be said that people who can draw are really not necessarily able to make good stories.
The past is a big tipping point, and the failure of the last experiment may have killed a student. This is a secret. It is very likely that there are still students secretly willing to help the teacher with the experiment, or the teacher coaxed the child to help her with the experiment, so that another student died. Then you can make the villain emotionally collapse and do something terrible or shocking, or you can make the decent character black or sacrifice or roar in anger.
All I can say is that storytelling must have explosive points, characters must grow and change, and things must have breakthroughs and progress.
5. If the heroine saves the hero, there will be no more animal experiments in the Magic Academy? The villain was finally surrounded by animals, but wouldn't a professor and a principal still have advanced magic? And that principal turned over the book looking for that key curse, wasn't that book written by you? The most critical magic that eliminates all magic is the same as the most critical explosion-proof device. You should be familiar with how to operate it. The headmaster of the best magic school has no demeanor at all. It's really disappointing, the big teacher in "Howl's Moving Castle", the villain witch, which one of Hal is not very imposing, Mi Lin Hongchang should study the script carefully.
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