"Prohibited Goods" Story Structure Archive

Kiarra 2021-12-02 08:01:29

Story structure:

(Publishing) Father and son are both master smugglers. Because his father was arrested and imprisoned, Chris retired from the world and successfully washed white;

(Transition) My brother-in-law encountered a rush by the customs for drug smuggling. In an emergency, the five kilograms of drugs were still in the sea; however, the bandit did not follow the routine, violently abused the brother-in-law and forced compensation at the price;

(Argument) Chris asked the black-market business to help make peace, but got the news that he would be compensated according to the shipment price; the negotiation failed, and the brother-in-law had to run away when he came back. The reason is that his companion died in the hospital, and he is now being compensated by astronomy. One person pays; Chris finds the bandit leader and asks for grace, but the bandit uses his family as a threat to anger Chris. Chris grabs a gun and overturns the bandit and says that his family has nothing to do with the matter. But Chris decides to smuggle, and after persuading his wife, he informs and sends Xiaoben, Ben suggested smuggling drugs; Chris insisted on the principle not to touch drugs, he smuggled counterfeit money;

(Bringing to the second act) Chris was mixed into a ship's work through the relationship of his father in prison, and contacted the ship to cooperate with a sailor as an internal response;

(Story B) The story of the captain and Chris fighting wits and courage; the cleanliness captain took a vacuum cleaner and went on the freighter; the captain had feud with Chris' father and made Chris a cleaner;

The story of a wife and a small book;

(Game time) Chris stole the structure diagram of the hull and found the empty wall of the cabin as the perfect place to hide money; secretly damaged the power system of the freighter, the freighter almost crashed into the pier, and came to shore safely. Although he was suspected by the captain, But there is no evidence; Chris took his brother-in-law and the money to steal the boat to buy counterfeit bills, and found that the quality of the counterfeit bills was defective; learned that the high-quality counterfeit bills were controlled by the mad dog, Chris decided to go to the mad dog to reach an agreement with the mad dog. It was learned that my brother-in-law answered the phone midway and was threatened by the bandit leader and had to use the money to buy drugs;

(Midpoint) The mad dog thinks he is being teased and wants to kill Chris and the others; Chris promised to help them to grab the money truck together;

(The bad guys approaching) During the robbery of the money carrier, the mad dog gang was completely wiped out; Chris used the broken oil on the money carrier to replenish the counterfeit money, and drove away with the mad dog shot; when the mad dog died halfway, they took back their documents and threw them away. After the corpse, he rushed into the last container at the last second; but because he was in a hurry, he almost fell into the sea with the car; the captain received a call from the customs asking to check the last few containers, and at the last second when the captain brought the customs, he was transferred smoothly. The customs found nothing;

(Nothing) Chris beats his brother-in-law violently, and the brother-in-law tells the truth about being forced to buy drugs; Chris calls this drug and plans to throw the drugs into the sea; Ben’s original face is exposed, it turns out that all of this was designed by him; The bandit asked Chris’s wife for trouble, and Ben came to stop it in time; Ben was going to pick up the child by car, so drunk, Chris’s wife drove away; the bandit rushed into his wife’s office the next day and didn’t ask his wife to call Chris. Do not throw away drugs;

(Dark hour) My wife went to my house to pick up things, Ben tried to get things wrong with her, and his wife hid the bathroom phone to ask for help, but Ben hit the door and fainted; Chris called the phone book and told him that he was a ghost and refused to bring drugs;

(Entering the third act) Ben called the captain to inform about the matter, and reached an agreement to split the profit; the captain sent someone to search Chris, and when he had nothing, he informed the customs and put on someone smuggling; Chris had a meal with the captain and put him in the captain’s room. Stole the keys; the maritime police came to search and found nothing, including the mezzanine where the counterfeit banknotes were hidden;

(Big battle) Ben’s body dumping site where he thought his wife had died; Chris was taken hostage by the bandit after he went ashore, and Chris took them to the captain’s house and deliberately touched the alarm device to call the police; opened the trunk of the car and took out drugs from the vacuum cleaner Chris slipped away, and the captain who heard the movement got up, saw the bandits taking drugs and reveling in his house, with a dazed expression; Chris found the broken door, found Ben and beat him up and found the construction site. His wife is about to be rescued from the concrete pouring site;

(Ending) Chris tied the counterfeit banknotes with salt and threw it into the shallow sea, and told the sailor to locate the GPS. The heavy salt melted the counterfeit banknotes and floated up during the pre-determined time; Ben and the bandits were sent to prison; the counterfeit banknotes were sold. To make a fortune, I accidentally learned that the Poyoubu was a world-famous painting, worth 140 million U.S. dollars. The unexpected harvest made Chris and the others happy;

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Extended Reading
  • Joannie 2022-03-26 09:01:05

    What's the story of the smuggler in hiding? I had to add a bunch of family, friendship, and love, and some inexplicable robbery and speeding, and fried it into a pot of bloody feast. After reading it, I have a feeling, it really is that people are not rich without windfall, and honestly working is no way to make money. Misunderstood children, misunderstood children!

  • Joannie 2022-04-23 07:02:02

    How can you be so beautiful, Sister Kate!

Contraband quotes

  • Chris Farraday: I've got to try and fix this. Trust me, I know what I'm doing.

  • Chris Farraday: [to Tim] You think you're the only guy with a fucking gun?