Speaking of screenwriters, our teacher taught us to write essays since we were young, and the story should be echoed before and after, and the story should have a backbone. At the beginning, Joe released the ipod, and at the end, Xiao Qiao cleared out non-like-minded people and regained control of Apple. Where is this echoing, people can't help seeing it. Those who know Jobs a little bit can tell a lot about it. Those who don't understand, think this is the first one, and there is a trilogy to be released.
In the story, it is like a running account, there is no small orgasm, and there is no big orgasm. At first glance, this screenwriter is just entering the industry. Anyway, choose someone who knows Jobs to write it?
Just as Jobs got an order for the first time, the screenwriter started messing around. You should know that Jobs didn't bring a generation prototype back then. He just walked around the exhibition and got the order. In order to promote the first generation, Jobs ran around and contacted various distributors. Just when everyone was desperate, the first order appeared. This should be the first climax to show Jobs' perseverance and courage to give up, but he was described without feeling. A large amount of the story was consumed by Jobs carrying a bunch of technical fishing lines to do research, which made people want to sleep, and there was no sense of urgency to start a business to fail.
The second climax should be the arrogance of Jobs when he released the Macintosh computer, calling himself the father of the Macintosh. When the climax of this story is about to come out, suddenly the pen is turned into the board of directors and the board is preparing to plot against Jobs.
Well, at the third climax, Jobs was kicked out of Apple. Jobs struggled hard on the cliff and was exiled to the little black house. The final struggle was not reflected. The screenwriter wanted to become a commercial movie to create a sense of urgency, but It's a mess.
The fourth climax is Jobs returning to Apple, how to turn the tide and save Apple. In the end it became a layoff game. Before everyone started to feel a little bit, it was over suddenly, and it was just held back for you.
The difficulty of a biographical film is how to control a clue, focus on the key point of a perspective, organize the story in an orderly manner, and attract people. This movie wanted to say too much, and finally suffocated myself to death.
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