Very neat yet novel love sketches.
The line of lie (family/family line) and the line of love are well integrated, and the inverted node is also very good. In the end, the lie was broken at the wedding where the lie should be broken. The ex-girlfriend's bitch is just so small, both as a joke and as a plot point.
After careful analysis, there are so few lines.
1. Misunderstanding between the heroine and the family/big brother. So many characters in the family are actually the same character, which creates a warm and desirable family atmosphere for the hostess. Rationalize the heroine's motives for lying. The family is so interesting even for small talk, the height of the male celebrity or something.
2. The eldest brother’s ex-girlfriend line (the first message is used to create information points and suspense, the second is to explain the existence of the cat and to dispel some male protagonists’ suspicion of the female protagonist, and the third field is used to create for the female protagonist. Crisis, the fourth hospital is used to explain the ins and outs, and the fifth big wedding is used to half-solve the crisis of the heroine.)
3. Female protagonist and male protagonist (mainly divided into three stages, one, hostility and suspicion, constantly using various questions to test the female protagonist. Including asking brother's various preferences in the hospital, saying that brother does not have cats in his house, Go to the hostess’s house to send off the sofa. The main change occurred on the night after sending the hostess home while walking and chatting. BTW, the lines of the two people walking and chatting were written too well. Second, dispel doubts, like the hostess and struggle. Since the "testicle incident", the protagonist completely believed in the identity of the heroine. And it was in the early morning of the second day that the protagonist and the heroine revealed to the people around them that they liked each other. The heroine was to the boss, The male protagonist is facing his comatose elder brother. Then the male protagonist falls into struggle and depression. Three, the despair of the elder brother after waking up.)
4. The male lead and the inheritance of the family business line (only a few short sessions are used to show. The first time the male lead took the female lead to the big brother’s house to give the sofa. The female lead praised the male lead’s craftsmanship and felt that he should start his own business. This may be The beginning of the male protagonist’s favor with the female protagonist. The second time was the male protagonist’s showdown with his father, and quickly gained his father’s approval.) Although this line is short, it is an important reason for the male protagonist to fall in love with the female protagonist.
5. The line between the heroine and the godfather (this line should be regarded as the most ingenious and the one with the best screenwriting skills. The first time the godfather heard the hostess's self-talk outside the hospital ward and knew the truth. The second time was After Christmas, the godfather said something about the hostess outside the door. The third time was when the godfather went to the hostess’s house and had a showdown with the hostess, expressing goodwill and reaching a tacit understanding. The fourth time was when the eldest brother woke up, the godfather The heroine promised to tell the truth on her behalf. The fifth time the godfather "lied" to the eldest brother and forcibly said the heroine was the elder brother's fiancée.)
6. The line between the heroine and the boss (feeling that the main function is to facilitate the heroine to reveal that she likes the second man and explain her lonely life experience)
7. The second generation line between the heroine and the house (maybe the main role is to explain the living environment of the heroine?)
It is very simple to explain the personality of the eldest brother. Not a bad person, but not worthy of a female lead like a male lead. The little detail is "rescuing the squirrels". In fact, he killed those squirrels and rescued them. Although it's not a big evil, but it's not so likable anymore. In addition, the fact that the heroine is the fiancée is a little bit degraded, right? In short, there is no charm. Although the hardware is superior, it is a bit silly.
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